Horrible ending! I strongly suggest that you rewrite the ending. I mean, I have no problem with the main character ending up with "Xiao 4", but the ending was too abrupt. There was no transition. Everything happened too suddenly. REWRITE THE ENDING! :(
网友:Jane 打分:0 [2004-02-12 07:47:11]
Horrible ending! I strongly suggest that you rewrite the ending. I mean, I have no problem with the main character ending up with "Xiao 4", but the ending was too abrupt. There was no transition. Everything happened too suddenly. REWRITE THE ENDING! :(