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网友:anna 打分:2 [2009-07-25 06:41:58]

i must say that your writing is very unique, full of ideas unlike other classic books.i just feel like crying when i read your work, it sadden my heart to see how xuan doing all this painful thing to wennuan. your writing has alot of ironic twist. i husee this is what keeps me reading this. personally, i hadn't experience any "love" affairs yet, but if love really is this terrible anf this... powerful, i can't find a word or words to describe it. i really think that i should think twice before think any of it. thank you, author, for your beautiful writing. i will treasure it always! oh, nice choice of muusic in the front cover, how come you become mfamilar with sooo many english music? 一3九九

   

[1楼] 网友:gzchristy [2009-11-20 03:04:48]

你好多词拼错了

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[2楼] 网友:Vicky [2010-07-10 21:35:30]


写中文算了

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[3楼] 网友:Vicky [2010-07-10 21:37:04]

打字太激动了吗
很多词都打错了

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[4楼] 网友:0 [2010-07-14 20:17:31]

假惺惺

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[5楼] 网友:tt [2010-07-15 01:34:56]

错就错了,没什么大不了的,不用如此吧……

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[6楼] 网友:Vicky [2010-07-18 14:02:35]

不用怎么嘛
我又没说什么
理解有问题啊

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[7楼] 网友:King [2010-07-26 21:35:48]

她想寫什麼就寫什麼,我倒覺得無所謂
有必要這麼說人家嗎?
寫英文就假惺惺嗎@@??
想法好奇怪喔~

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[8楼] 网友:Shellet [2010-10-16 17:33:56]

Ignore the other comments, they're just being sour. Your English is the best I've seen in terms of grammatical correctness. Your mistakes were mainly in tense and subject-verb agreement, ie. saddened and ironic twists, and of course, 'I' not i. The others are just typos, I think.
Do you live in an English-speaking country? Your English flows beautifully. I haven't finish reading 温暖的弦 yet. In fact I've only read the first chapter, but I believe it's a HE.

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[9楼] 网友:eva [2010-10-23 03:48:26]

话说,那个啥,在说英语国家呆了很久的人用语习惯是不一样的,首先不是写论文时候绝对不会用如此完整的表达方式,第二,用词方面,楼主的文中可都是高中经典套句啊!
在jj上看到这么长的英语评,着实有点寒。

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