网友：唧唧歪歪 打分：0 [2007-08-06 10:10:45]

To JO:
when “Until”is at first, it will be better to change "i will" to "will i";
"i can only" will be better than "i only can";
"speak in english" must be "speak english";
Or you might show your humour as "good good study,day day up!",so it is funny and don't care my talk nonsense!

   

 
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