网友：Tiffany评论：《在黑暗的河流上》 打分：8 发表时间：2004-12-20 11:48:51所评章节：88（点击进入所评章节）
For godness sake, I don’t know why people likes your story so much.....probably because it’s really nice but I find myself lacking patience to read it. I just stopped after reading the first few chapters.....what is the whole story about? Why does all the characters change??? And how come the plot development is so damn boring??/ LOL....I know I’m a bit harsh but it is such a headache to read this......OPPS!
PS. maybe I’ll take time to consider this when I’m free....no offence to anyone regarding my comment!!!^_^Foreigners do have some different opinions as those who live in China though...
网友：森林唱游 打分：0 [2004-12-20 22:01:22]
网友：Tiffany评论：《在黑暗的河流上》 打分：8 发表时间：2004-12-20 11:48:51所评章节：88（点击进入所评章节）
For godness sake, I don’t know why people likes your story so much.....probably because it’s really nice but I find myself lacking patience to read it. I just stopped after reading the first few chapters.....what is the whole story about? Why does all the characters change??? And how come the plot development is so damn boring??/ LOL....I know I’m a bit harsh but it is such a headache to read this......OPPS!
PS. maybe I’ll take time to consider this when I’m free....no offence to anyone regarding my comment!!!^_^Foreigners do have some different opinions as those who live in China though...
这个故事吗？当然是讲述一个女孩从少女到青年的成长过程，所以，有的人物离开了这个故事，有的人物加入了这个故事，这是这么简单＾＾。
你不喜欢我的故事，我一点都不觉得奇怪。我个人觉得，人世间，一个人和另一个人能否沟通，起初都有一个如对密码的仪式，通不过的话，这两个人就如同来自两个星球，还不如放弃沟通，笑。所以，我给你一个建议，对于我这篇小说，如果开始就看不进去，就不如别浪费时间了＾＾。
不过，老实说，对于那些能突破淡而无味的高校篇，进入冗长平缓的大学篇，甚至也决定继续跟读不知会如何发展的社会篇的读者，我真的很感动，笑。如果他们从这篇小说平淡的情节里读出了一些别的什么，那肯定是痛苦多于快乐，但痛苦也许也会有一点价值吧。至少，身为作者的我，自认为是用了全部的感情在写这篇小说，倘若仍然淡如开水，也只是因为本人实在是写不出浓墨重彩的情节而已＝＝。笑。