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      It's all booked,
      I can't watch it.
      It's really ugly.
      The character image has written a shovel.
      Isn't the part of the story of the E-sports just the routine I endured to watch next door?
      The same e-sports routine and cool points,
      especially the emotional line
      where is the emotional warming up?
      Where is the turning point?
      This man is born infatuated?
      Then you should write down this point in detail.
      Just like your emotional lines,
      they are buried in the earth with lines.
      You can see a little shadow only if you look carefully.
      Others write essays and play with bright lines and dark lines alternately.
      You can write dark lines directly.
      The emotional lines of the main character follow the emotional lines of the supporting role.
      They can only see the surface.
      Oh, it's sweet to send some biscuits and candy.
      It's sweet to follow a pupil and buy a lollipop,
      Can love only be based on material?
      Not to mention what moved the male leader later,
      let's first say that the male leader is hot outside and cold inside.
      Hot only helps others to have a good temper.
      Cold refers to the background and his real talent and learning.
      I want to ask how dare you write about the male leader to show weakness when you don't have the male leader to understand other advantages of the female leader that I don't see?
      Oh, there is such a henpecked wife in the bone.
      Why don't you write a novel directly and set a template for people?
      The character image needs plot and details to be displayed,
      it is not a matter that you can solve in a word.
      There is also an xt place.
      A psychological description of the mistress completely makes me despair.
      She doesn't feel much about it. She even wants to show her love. "
      Call 6666 directly.
      I really want to ask you if you have ever been in love.
      I'm convinced. Which couple show their love is such a psychology??
      Couples show love is to show that my object loves me very much,
      or to show that I love my object very much. What is this kind of emotionless,
      or even to show a woman's character that doesn't care about external comments by using a sentence "even want to show love" to show it,
      especially to show that the man and woman are very love or want to show the image of the character? It's just like a rose inserted in the *. What does it say? Can we talk about love first?? Not to mention the Shuangwen routine, there are some young fans who really buy the character image. Is the Chinese character image of high school not getting a point?? Have you ever studied Chinese well in high school? The characters directly describe the appearance, demeanor, language, action, psychology, profile, details, supporting role, environment, contrast and other techniques. I dare not try to connect the characters with the local atmosphere. Let's see whether the Xianglin sister-in-law Ah q in Lu Xun's novel is connected with the local atmosphere, and see whether the Pig Bajie in the Journey to the West is connected with the local atmosphere? Look at this article again. Is there one thing that women and men are more grounded? I don't see the shortcomings of normal people in this article. They are all fake and forced
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