原本写着:Jiaheng representative to confirm all remediation completion dates during kick-off.(嘉恒代表须在启动会议中确认全部整改完成日期。)
他改成:Jiaheng representative to present confirmed status, identified constraints and proposed sequencing. Management commitments to be separately approved.(嘉恒代表负责汇报已确认进度、已识别限制及建议执行顺序。管理层承诺须另行批准。)